Thursday 20 August 2020

 

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  1. Unknown23 August 2020 at 19:04

    Ngā mihi Hori,

    Things I enjoyed;
    -You've used 'ly' words at the beginning of your 'ly' sentences

    Next Steps;
    -Ensure the 'ly' words you use match the sentence, e.g., Doing Mrs Rabbit's carrot cake is missing 'change to' Mysteriously, Mrs Rabbit's cake is missing

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